Story things, I don't know. Honestly, I wold suggest that you read somebody else's stories. I recommend TheKyuubiVixen or DarthJosef.

Sauerissig's Letters.	Here
Preserved Railway Engines	Here
In Hell's Way	Here
As The World Gives	Here
Rescue Team Chaotix (I'd recommend not reading it.)	Here
Somebody That's New (Never finished. Don't read, it's bad and old.)	Here